Look how exotically God mixed her spices
in no hurry, he blended curry and coriander leaves
with fresh Basmati rices and look what He achieved:
this insatiable flavour both savoury and sweet
honey marinated meat, tender and tingling to the lips
look how He mastered the sway of her hips
like hills and valleys for me to explore
but that wasnt His grande finale, oh no, there's more
you wont believe what magic her hands can do when they begin
it's like they're wrapped in silk
like God poured jugs full of coconut milk into her skin
cos her hugs wipe away every hurtful blemish and sin
and when she dances
she's got every warrior making bold advances
see when God made her, He gave her a smile to end wars
like a fountain of youth, it heals lost time and mends sores
her tears flow from a mountain of juice,
writing lemon flavoured poems across her cheek
so to hear her speak, i must confess, makes my knees weak
and when she stands before me in full bloom
i cant help thinking of a crystal moon
a real wonder, a miracle
there's no words to describe the spell i feel under
because her deepest beauty is spiritual
see, her masterpiece is her heart
you can tell this is where God chose to start
for all else about her is as resplendant and regal
she is indeed a living angel among people.
In case i dont get to play you my song
know that i love you as the day is long
and you would know this if you'd heard my unhindered lyrics
that boast of kindred spirits and eternal flames
our souls are one and the same
for when, by some infernal shame,
my own perished, your ghost lingered near it
and I became whole again
so in case you dont ever hear me play
know that my love is here to stay
today and everyday.
For my Queen Bee, Ishta N Kutesa and other names: You make me feel like dancing! You're an angel.
Wednesday, November 22, 2006
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and here's my song...
(clears throat)
you are my sunshine
my only sunshine
you make me haaaaappy
when skies are gray
unoriginal you say? ok, how bout...
roses are red
some socks are black
won't u be my daddy mac?
roses are red
some lotion is pink
if you don't save me
i just might sink!
roses are red
paper is white
come away with me
let's take flight
roses are red
some curtains are brown
whatchu waitin for
hurry up and skip town!
(yup, thought that one up all on my witty little lonesome!)
This is beautiful.
ehhe!
is JR 'THE MAN BEING LOVED'?
Cherie: was that you blushing?
you know i'm a supercitical whatever sometimes and because i was so engaged with this song, i just had to come back and say: beautiful performance BUT, yes, you knew that was coming...i think you wobbled slightly on: "but that wasnt His grande finale, oh no, there's more
you wont believe what magic her hands can do when they begin"
i think that part comes out a bit of slow and forced like you were catching your breath or worse had no words so these were a filler. artistically speaking, that is. but i absolutely love it. kind of brought to mind some ghetto poet in a studio booth for the first time rapping for all he is worth, not pausing for breath. it was/is beautiful.
@Iwaya...its now too much....blushed my cheeks off here. Then I when to Joshi's current post and died-sweet death-
iwaya; errr... ya think!?!
No, I don't think so! two writers and poets at that, combustible!
crash and burn baby!
We have us a lovely family over here. Happy holidays ya'll!
this is turning out to be quite a childless union i must say!
indian flutes enter your spine with great relief....they are good and their dances even make it loook....
BLAZES!!!!! Whatever happened to Just Rich?!?
Iwaya,me thinks we should putup birango ku CBS...
Is there a lost and found somewhere...lets check there.
Simply Beautiful!!!!
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