Monday, March 05, 2007

Time Machine

I used to count the hours
and have to take cold showers
cos of the spiritual hold you had on me

Now i'm without a clue
of whats going on with you
and whether or not you still want us to be

I'm having trouble manipulating time
so this is me hoping for a sign.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is good but am thinking of the time machine like the one Will smith had in The persuit of happyness as refered to by the psycho guy

Cheri said...

Is this the sign u been waiting for????

Iwaya said...

i know what this state of being is called. i heard it described in a song i had, incredibly never listened to before: they call it "living in the in between."

Iwaya said...

I notice you have gone back to your old habit of fast flicking through different avators again. should we be like having a Hmmm...moment?

and that poem was way too short. you're not known for writing haiku. another lip biting way of saying i liked it.

eddiie said...

i wonder who that could be...any idea..no!!

Quillonpaper said...

@Cheri: You see what i mean! Let's await the answer to that question... not forgetting that sometimes the silence can also be the eloquence. And no, I'm not still at it.

@Just Rich: C'est magnifique!